New Releases-November 30th 2019

[Majorwrll]

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Apophenia (mc mf md) (new)  by Meleva
Phenia doesn’t belong at Lady Sionamuid’s Academy for Young Sorceresses and Sorcerers, and she knows it. But if she can’t find a way to blend in, and fast, then soon everyone else will know it too.

Arousal Inducing Audio (mc ff ma) (new)  by Synaptic Virus
Two girls experiment with sexy subliminals. Not realizing the messages are designed to slowly turn them lesbian.

Blake’s Magic Ring (mc mf mm md ds) (2 new chapters)  by Daisy Isabella Britt de Melcker
Blake Hamilton inherits a ring that allows him to command the minds of certain people.

Crossing the Rubicon (mc mf ff mm fd md) (4 new chapters)  by br0adband
There are moments in a lifetime where, with a single step, a line is crossed, a goal is achieved, a dream becomes a reality. Once that line is crossed, there’s no going back to who or what you might have been before. This is such a journey for one person.

The Cube (mc mf md) (new)  by Dede
Curtis sees his teacher after class after she confiscates his Rubik’s Cube.

Dead of Night (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by SoVeryFascinated
An actress responds well to a stage hypnosis show ... and so does someone else.

Decor (mc mf md hm ex) (1 new chapter)  by Mr. B
Kara and Paul visit the hot new restaurant in town where guests are given the option to become part of the decor.

Diary of a Hypnotist (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Atte. Akisa
A hypnotist recounts his exploits, both present and past, for the benefit of posterity.

Don’t Fight It (mc ff sf) (new)  by Jukebox
Dawn’s coworker found something fascinating on her afternoon walk, and she can’t wait to show it to Dawn.

Drifting (mc ff) (new)  by MoldedMind
Helen has a recurring dream every night; if only she could keep dreaming it all day long.

Drone Metastasis (mc mf ff fd bd ft) (new)  by Half Shim
A nuclear family experiences the Hive invasion as it insidiously takes over their city.

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (4 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Ghost Boy (mc mf ff md fd in la hm) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
Kyle has the ability to leave his body and become an invisible, ghost-like apparition. When he’s in this ‘ghost form’, he can influence the minds of anyone he touches. But, as he soon discovers, there’s far more to his power than just that.

Her Husband’s Hucow (mc ff ma la gr ds) (1 new chapter)  by CNP
Mary and a few of her old college friends are invited to an almost forgotten friend’s home. What was expected to be a weekend of relaxation and reminiscing soon turns into something more expansive to the exquisite delight of everyone involved.

Incubus (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Christina summons a demon, who has the ability to grant her greatest desire.

Intended Attraction (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
In this sequel to Unintended Attraction, our hero starts to take for granted the growing mastery of his ability.

The Internship (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Greyscribbler
Nichole is looking forward to learning a lot from her internship. She will.

Legacy — The Chosen (mc mf md gr) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Lana is chosen to be the mother of a god.

Olivia’s Ass Toy (mc ff ft) (new)  by kmiru0
Olivia uses hypnosis to transform her partner into her ass toy.

Poetry & Blood (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Trixie Adara
Laura gets a new job for a strange romance writer that seems to be too good to be true.

A Price Paid (mc mf ff md fd) (2 new chapters)  by Saddle Rider
Losing a prized possession to mages, a powerful man seeks revenge.

Prime Numbers (mc mf md hm) (new)  by All These Roadworks
Shelby asks her friend Kumar, a psych major, to help her with her math class.

Probed (mc mf ff md fd rb la sf) (1 new chapter)  by MCaesar
A group of college students are abducted by aliens wishing to study human sexuality.

Senioritis (mc mf ff fd md ds bd ft hm) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Marc explores sexuality with a 19-year-old dominant woman.

The Silken (mc ff mf mm in ft) (1 new chapter)  by Templeton Rose
Gina visits the new upscale hosiery boutique in town.

Space Nut (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Adam discovers a crash landed alien who shares a taste for women with him, and together they will have them all, no matter the price.

Sssslipping Into the Jungle (mc mf md ft) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Actress Jennifer gets lost while on a shooting break in India, only to come across a well known hypnotic serpent.

Subroutine (Kallie) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
Lori, a college student, discovers she has a hypnotic trigger that turns her into a mindless, obedient drone. How? Why? And what’s going to happen when her roommate finds out?

There’s Something in the Water (mc mf in) (new)  by RawlyRawls
An alien scientist arrives on Earth to conduct experiments in reproduction.

Vox Dominus (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Mesmerciless
When Seb accidentally enslaves his classmate with his voice, they both get more than they bargained for.

Whatever Gets You Through The Night (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by T.MaskedWriter
A movie shoot in San Finzione is interrupted by a real-life murder.

Wildwood (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by notorioushypno
A mind control conspiracy spawns small-town hokum, entangling a group of plucky university students, some deadbeat locals, and a team of federal investigators.

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover (mc ff mf fd ds) (1 new chapter)  by Alan Smithee
Senator Delacroix has a lot on his plate. His wife is cheating, an important vote is coming up, and the new intern? She might be a witch.

[321]

It's here!

[Daisy]

hurray! new chapters no-one will read!

[Pan]

hurray! new chapters no-one will read!

I guarantee, each story posted gets many thousands of reads (even if you get zero comments). Simon doesn't share the data, but from my experience with comparable sites which do, the ratio is like 10,000:1 reads to comments.

[walter_kovacs]

I guarantee, each story posted gets many thousands of reads (even if you get zero comments). Simon doesn't share the data, but from my experience with comparable sites which do, the ratio is like 10,000:1 reads to comments.

Hard to know if the ratio is higher or about the same here of course (community is totally different), but the one story I've posted to literotica got ~10k views and 2 comments, so yeah.



Vox Dominus (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Mesmerciless
When Seb accidentally enslaves his classmate with his voice, they both get more than they bargained for.

This update is starting to get into the juicy bits that the earlier chapters were setting up. I'm enjoying it a lot, and looking forward to seeing where it's going. From where it's sitting now it's shaping up to be a fairly traditional yellow story about discovering that you've got MC powers, but that's not a bad thing. The perspective shifting back and forth inside the chapter I'm not sold on, but I do understand the struggle of feeling like you need to get into the thoughts of two important characters who are interacting.



The Cube (mc mf md) (new)  by Dede
Curtis sees his teacher after class after she confiscates his Rubik’s Cube.

I'm noticing a teacher/school theme 

No frills and gets to the point very quickly. I liked the Rubik's Cube as a device with a thematic connection to the scrambling of the mind. Definitely worth a read.

[gyrd]

"Vox Dominus" is getting really good.

[321]

Another strong chapter of Wildwood. I'm starting to see why people love it when the bad guys win! Everything is still up in the air here, so who knows what ending we'll get? 

Vox Dominus is definitely growing on me. I really enjoy the creative "overlap"of what our main characters are thinking and hearing. ProTip: Let the phone go to voicemail!

Also in the world of creative MC, Dede's The Cube introduces an interesting method of control with

Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.

Of course, if I were the main protagonist the story would be about as long as Crossing the Rubicon and would have ended with me finishing one side and calling it a day.

[zapped13]

Enjoying 'Decor' by M 

[Pan]

"Vox Dominus" is getting really good.

I read this on Gyrd's recommendation and really enjoyed it! A bunch of nice character stuff - looking forward to seeing where it goes.

[MetaBob]

Blake’s Magic Ring (mc mf mm md ds) (2 new chapters)  by Daisy Isabella Britt de Melcker
Blake Hamilton inherits a ring that allows him to command the minds of certain people.

A very simple premise: a magic ring that makes most (but not all) people submit. The women who do are very sexy, in that big-breasted submissive way Daisy has. But then character development happens in chapter 3, and rather well. Chapters 4-5 hit my squick button, so I skimmed.

Crossing the Rubicon (mc mf ff mm fd md) (4 new chapters)  by br0adband
There are moments in a lifetime where, with a single step, a line is crossed, a goal is achieved, a dream becomes a reality. Once that line is crossed, there’s no going back to who or what you might have been before. This is such a journey for one person.

It has become a very long piece, virtually impossible to follow when so much new writing appears every week, especially when I have my own writing to attend to, as well-written as br0adband's stuff always is. Sorry, bb.

Vox Dominus (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by Mesmerciless
When Seb accidentally enslaves his classmate with his voice, they both get more than they bargained for.

Nice!

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover (mc ff mf fd ds) (1 new chapter)  by Alan Smithee
Senator Delacroix has a lot on his plate. His wife is cheating, an important vote is coming up, and the new intern? She might be a witch.

"She might be"? Fun concept,

Sorry but you are not allowed to view spoiler contents.

expertly and delightfully handled.

[MetaBob]

Apophenia (mc mf md) (new)  by Meleva
Phenia doesn’t belong at Lady Sionamuid’s Academy for Young Sorceresses and Sorcerers, and she knows it. But if she can’t find a way to blend in, and fast, then soon everyone else will know it too.

An intriguing beginning, very well-written. I like it enough that I've started reading the same author's Pact, which seems to be on hiatus and is also very well-written.

[walter_kovacs]

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover (mc ff mf fd ds) (1 new chapter)  by Alan Smithee
Senator Delacroix has a lot on his plate. His wife is cheating, an important vote is coming up, and the new intern? She might be a witch.

"She might be"?

 

Nobody has checked whether she floats or weighs the same as a duck, so the jury is still out on this issue 

[Daisy]

Blake’s Magic Ring (mc mf mm md ds) (2 new chapters)  by Daisy Isabella Britt de Melcker
Blake Hamilton inherits a ring that allows him to command the minds of certain people.

A very simple premise: a magic ring that makes most (but not all) people submit. The women who do are very sexy, in that big-breasted submissive way Daisy has. But then character development happens in chapter 3, and rather well. Chapters 4-5 hit my squick button, so I skimmed.

Glad you enjoyed chapter 3! It wrote itself! Come back for Chapter 6 and 7 which will feature the triplets and SPOILER but what little i will say is there will be more character development and plot. Though technically chapter 4 was plot, too. 4 and 5 are one chapter but i put all the sex (male on male anyway) in chapter 5 so you can read chapter 4 and be caught up with the story.

also hurray i got a review

[Pan]

Finally got a chance to check out The Internship, and it's pure gold. I really need to read Fair Share at some point, too...

[Writer345]

Subroutine (Kallie) (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
Lori, a college student, discovers she has a hypnotic trigger that turns her into a mindless, obedient drone. How? Why? And what’s going to happen when her roommate finds out?

An update at last after a six-month break, thanks Kallie!  I was begining to fear that you had given up on this one but am very glad that you haven't.  Story is still as intriguing as ever with it being no where near its conclusion after nine chapters. 

[greyscribbler]

Finally got a chance to check out The Internship, and it's pure gold. I really need to read Fair Share at some point, too...

Thanks Pan, glad you liked it.  Part 3 is already on its way to Simon.

Greyscribbler

[gyrd]

"Vox Dominus" is getting really good.

I read this on Gyrd's recommendation and really enjoyed it! A bunch of nice character stuff - looking forward to seeing where it goes.

I particularly liked the bit where the victim fights off a frontal assault only for the hero to MC her in stages.  That was hot.

[walter_kovacs]

Dead of Night (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by SoVeryFascinated
An actress responds well to a stage hypnosis show ... and so does someone else.

So this was a longer form one I wanted to get stuck into. I'm now caught up, and I think it's quite good, but I can only recommend it to people who are ok with a very slow burn. This is leaning a lot more heavily into the "Literature" side of Erotic Literature. It's currently sitting around the ~30k mark, it's got at least one (probably multiple) chapters to go and I will probably continue to read in future updates to see where it goes.

[mr potestas]

hurray! new chapters no-one will read!

I guarantee, each story posted gets many thousands of reads (even if you get zero comments). Simon doesn't share the data, but from my experience with comparable sites which do, the ratio is like 10,000:1 reads to comments.

Indeed, whenever I post a quickie on the Archive, the visitation on my blog jumps dramatically for a couple days at least.

[gyrd]

hurray! new chapters no-one will read!

I guarantee, each story posted gets many thousands of reads (even if you get zero comments). Simon doesn't share the data, but from my experience with comparable sites which do, the ratio is like 10,000:1 reads to comments.

The EMCSA would be well served with a "like/dislike" button.

[Chrystal Wynd]

hurray! new chapters no-one will read!

I guarantee, each story posted gets many thousands of reads (even if you get zero comments). Simon doesn't share the data, but from my experience with comparable sites which do, the ratio is like 10,000:1 reads to comments.

The EMCSA would be well served with a "like/dislike" button.

Agreed. If nothing else, it would help authors gauge interest in their stories. Without thread comments or email messages, it can be very difficult to tell if anyone is reading at all. Particularly now when the updates are getting bigger.

[fascinated]

Dead of Night (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by SoVeryFascinated
An actress responds well to a stage hypnosis show ... and so does someone else.

So this was a longer form one I wanted to get stuck into. I'm now caught up, and I think it's quite good, but I can only recommend it to people who are ok with a very slow burn. This is leaning a lot more heavily into the "Literature" side of Erotic Literature. It's currently sitting around the ~30k mark, it's got at least one (probably multiple) chapters to go and I will probably continue to read in future updates to see where it goes.

Thanks for the kind review. This one will finish up this week with an update of about 9K words. I get that it's kind of a slow one; since my kink is basically just the act of hypnosis itself, this story was really doing it for me while I was writing it, but YMMV.

[softi]

hurray! new chapters no-one will read!

I guarantee, each story posted gets many thousands of reads (even if you get zero comments). Simon doesn't share the data, but from my experience with comparable sites which do, the ratio is like 10,000:1 reads to comments.

The EMCSA would be well served with a "like/dislike" button.

Agreed. If nothing else, it would help authors gauge interest in their stories. Without thread comments or email messages, it can be very difficult to tell if anyone is reading at all. Particularly now when the updates are getting bigger.

I'd like a count of hits, but I'm not sure about ratings necessarily. They are subjective and deal with kinks instead of writing quality at times. And then they're are the trolls...

[gyrd]

I'd like a count of hits, but I'm not sure about ratings necessarily. They are subjective and deal with kinks instead of writing quality at times. And then they're are the trolls...

I don't see anything wrong about kink being a factor in rating a story on a website dedicated to kink.

As for trolls...I dunno, are there going to be a lot of people roaming the EMCSA downvoting stories?  What would be the point?

Of course, a hit counter would also be nice.

[mr potestas]

I'd like a count of hits, but I'm not sure about ratings necessarily. They are subjective and deal with kinks instead of writing quality at times. And then they're are the trolls...

I don't see anything wrong about kink being a factor in rating a story on a website dedicated to kink.

As for trolls...I dunno, are there going to be a lot of people roaming the EMCSA downvoting stories?  What would be the point?

Of course, a hit counter would also be nice.

Trolls are everywhere...

Perhaps this could be split off into a separate discussion?