New Releases-November 23rd 2019

[Majorwrll]

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Algorithm (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Carefully Random
Tiffany’s friends discover the mind blanking capabilities of an audio visual sensory input algorithm.  It isn’t long before they want to know how powerful the algorithm can be, but they will need test subjects: willing or otherwise…

Bedtime Story (mc mf md) (new)  by scifiscribbler
An innocent mistake highlights why bedtime stories are for adults, too.

Binding Rings (mc mf md in) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
A chance discovery changes a young man’s life—and not always for the better.

Blizzard (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
When Gene treats a strange visitor to better hospitality than she thinks she’s worth, she overcompensates him with three beautiful co-ed princesses. Auditors have been notified of the discrepancy.

Blood on Parchment (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Doctor D.
Alderose’s husband-to-be has been missing for several weeks. Though no one believes her, she’s pretty sure he’s been taken by another woman. Or a monster. She isn’t too sure.

Brain Development Enterprises (mc mf md in) (2 new chapters)  by JC Beleren
A man purchases a series of self-hypnosis recordings to help him become more assertive.

Bubblegum & Plastic (mc ff mf fd md ma in gr) (new)  by Traveling None
Cindy is an anti-porn crusader who’s life changes when she receives an odd bit of hate mail: a doll that looks just like her, only with some impossibly bouncy additions. Soon Cindy finds that the doll, and all of it’s risque sayings are becoming more and more accurate, and the line between woman and bimbo-doll blurs rapidly. Cindy struggles to keep her mind from drifting, even as her own body betrays her. Will Cindy ever become normal again, or will she forever be an empty-headed plaything?

Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Cattle and the Creeping Things (mc ff mf) (new)  by Jukebox
A woman explains to you what life is going to be like now that you can see the Creeping Things.

Crossing the Rubicon (mc mf ff mm fd md) (4 new chapters)  by br0adband
There are moments in a lifetime where, with a single step, a line is crossed, a goal is achieved, a dream becomes a reality. Once that line is crossed, there’s no going back to who or what you might have been before. This is such a journey for one person.

Dead of Night (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by SoVeryFascinated
An actress responds well to a stage hypnosis show ... and so does someone else.

Decisive (mc md ds hm) (new)  by All These Roadworks
Tori hopes that hypnosis will help her with her difficulty making decisions.

Deep Undercover (mc mf md fd) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Paul is a private eye who dabbles in hypnosis. Cassie is his beautiful client. But there’s more to their relationship—and their case—than meets the eye.

Dreams upon Dreams (mc mm) (new)  by Meleva
Prince Dheren needs a bedtime story. With a magical storyteller in the castle, what better nightcap could there be than delving into sorcerous dreams?

Extracts From The Westriver Gazette (mc fd) (new)  by HypnoticHarlequin
Ada Anderson is new in town. And what better way to introduce herself than to write to the local paper?

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (4 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Giselle the Gazelle (mc ff fu) (new)  by AWMBH
Giselle just wants to drift and relax in her dreamy sleep, but a strange buzzing keeps waking her up. Does it have something to do with the strange menagerie of hypnotized beauty queens dressed up as cute and sexy animals all around her?

Her Husband’s Hucow (mc ff ma la gr ds) (1 new chapter)  by CNP
Mary and a few of her old college friends are invited to an almost forgotten friend’s home. What was expected to be a weekend of relaxation and reminiscing soon turns into something more expansive to the exquisite delight of everyone involved.

Hostel (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

House of Hypnosis (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Rhea Corvos
Alice and her realtor look at a house that might be haunted.

I Hate My Master (mc mm) (1 new chapter)  by maxrpotter
Mark moves in with a new roommate, and finds himself getting annoyed by a few small things about him, like when he leaves dishes in the sink, or when he leaves his clothes around the place, or when he gives Mark orders that he is unable to disobey.

I Hear and Obey (mc ff mf fd sf rb) (2 new chapters)  by Roboman127
A powerful woman maintains her supply of Slaves from Earth of the past and present.

In Good Hands (mc mf ff md ma in) (1 new chapter)  by Quiet Hypnotist
While living alone under one roof with her horny cousin, Chayenne grows more and more puzzled over her reaction to him. If only she could calm down and figure out what’s wrong. Surely his massages could help?

The Internship (mc ff) (new)  by Greyscribbler
Nichole is looking forward to learning a lot from her internship. She will.

The Mind Control Device (mc mf ff md in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Dean invents a mind control device.

The Mind Masters Of Earth (mc ff sf) (new)  by Delta Wave
It’s been six years since the unscrupulous telepaths, the Mind Masters, took over the world and established a global tyrannical government. A young woman, Maya Hudson, hates the telepaths’ regime with a passion. But, as she’s conscripted for service at the Masters’ governmental complex, her life is about to change drastically...

Mother’s Shadow (mc ff) (new)  by Mind Zapper
The daughter of the most feared sorceress in the known Realms, young Claire struggles with following in her mother’s evil mind-controlling footsteps.

A Price Paid (mc mf ff md fd) (1 new chapter)  by Saddle Rider
Losing a prized possession to mages, a powerful man seeks revenge.

Quest for Tamsin (mc mf fd) (1 new chapter)  by Argos
An unexpected journey unearths more buried memories of Elle’s past, and shows Louis the door to a secret realm of pleasure and service.

Refashioned (mc ff ft rb) (1 new chapter)  by zorkmeister
Annabel gets far more than she bargained for when she goes online shopping.

Responding to the Siren’s Song (mc fd) (new)  by Otis
A deeply entranced man professes his desires to his Goddess.

Salem’s Blood (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Jan is invited to go to a grave of a witch but she soon discovers it’s not all pretend.

School Foot Daze (mc fd ft) (new)  by Jake Elwoods
A college student is overwhelmed by the smell of Janet’s feet.

Senioritis (mc mf ff fd md ds bd ft hm) (1 new chapter)  by MɛtaBob
Marc explores sexuality with a 19-year-old dominant woman.

The Silken (mc ff mf mm in ft) (new)  by Templeton Rose
Gina visits the new upscale hosiery boutique in town.

Sisters (SleepyTimeSlut) (mc ff mf in) (1 new chapter)  by SleepyTimeSlut
Kenzie used to be a smart, serious student. But when her sister starts filling her iPod with “special” music, Kenzie becomes a little dumber, a lot more horny, and way more agreeable.

Space Nut (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Adam discovers a crash landed alien who shares a taste for women with him, and together they will have them all, no matter the price.

Sssslipping Into the Jungle (mc mf md ft) (1 new chapter)  by Sleepy Hypno
Actress Jennifer gets lost while on a shooting break in India, only to come across a well known hypnotic serpent.

Succubus Summoned (mc ff mf fd md be) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Cara is a succubus and is summoned by her Master. She must travel across country.

Teacher’s Lazy Friday Night (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Patrax
Katie doesn’t understand why she changed into her sexiest lingerie after coming home from school. Her mind has been very murky lately.

Vanity (Dede) (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Dede
Denise is really enjoying this new shade of lipstick she ordered.

Wildwood (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by notorioushypno
A mind control conspiracy spawns small-town hokum, entangling a group of plucky university students, some deadbeat locals, and a team of federal investigators.

Wires (mc sf) (new)  by MoldedMind
On a routine visit to the server room, Jessie gets more than she bargained for.

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover (mc ff mf fd ds) (2 new chapters)  by Alan Smithee
Senator Delacroix has a lot on his plate. His wife is cheating, an important vote is coming up, and the new intern? She might be a witch.

[Dede]

Teacher’s Lazy Friday Night (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Patrax
Katie doesn’t understand why she changed into her sexiest lingerie after coming home from school. Her mind has been very murky lately.

Well I'm jumping in first this time! The title grabbed my attention right away, being a teacher myself. I was wondering where it was going and the discovery elicited a number of different feelings from me...

I'm now wondering if there will be more. Well written and well paced story!

[Dede]

Mother’s Shadow (mc ff) (new)  by Mind Zapper
The daughter of the most feared sorceress in the known Realms, young Claire struggles with following in her mother’s evil mind-controlling footsteps.

MindZapper's first posted story and it's fantastic! The descriptions, the way he described the twist and the feelings of Claire... and knowing there's much more to come! I'm honored to have had a chance to preview it and give feedback during the process!

[Mind Zapper]

Mother’s Shadow (mc ff) (new)  by Mind Zapper
The daughter of the most feared sorceress in the known Realms, young Claire struggles with following in her mother’s evil mind-controlling footsteps.

MindZapper's first posted story and it's fantastic! The descriptions, the way he described the twist and the feelings of Claire... and knowing there's much more to come! I'm honored to have had a chance to preview it and give feedback during the process!

Thank you Dede! I appreciate your mention and thrilled you enjoyed my opening. A great deal of thanks for how well this turned out goes to MetaBob. He challenged me to tighten my prose not in one editing pass, or even two, but in at least 5 editing passes. The chapter increased a good 1000 words based on his suggestions for edits and additions.

[321]

Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Holy hell, that was a hot brainwashing session!

[CerebusOne]

Comments on some of the stories I managed to read today:

321s Deep Undercover. Paul is giving it the old college try but every time Tara goes back into the Avery hole it shakes me to the core. Too dangerous. Every time back on that limb it gets thinner and weaker. This is such a dangerous game and you feel like one they will lose.

Loved how Cassie is talking about Tara and what she would tell her. It is her.....talk about a split personality. She has become shattered by this MC yo yo.

Meagan and Tara scene at the end with Avery calling the shots so very hot and well written. "Duh".

The we have 321s second entry Hostel. Man what a tense crazy twisted ride with ebbs and flows. Loved that scene where Rebecca is controlling new hot bartender Grace. Grace is obviously very willful and has plans for her future....well.......she did but now is in the clutches of the 'new' Rebecca, or one could call her Alice II. You get the idea all that is left for Grace in her life is serving her.

Her good friend Emily who Rebecca cared so much for is now also a slave to her. Rebecca is leaving a trail of hypnotic destruction in he wake. Celeste, the cause of this says she may have created a monster. Rebecca counters the she created a mistress. Both are correct.

Yet even now there is still a semblance of the old caring Rebecca when she realizes the real Celeste would not want her having sex with Grace.

As 321 so expertly and often does, once again we exit with a cliff hanger. Edwin and Amanda have assumed the upper hand......until the lights go out. TENSION.

Now the long wait to see what happens. UGH!!! Thanks 321.


Also gotta mention Greyscribbler's The Internship. I have always been a sucker for the, young girl interns at company......big changes to come....stories and when I saw Grey was doing this one my heart soared, lol. The reason is Grey understand MC in a very unique way, he understands pacing like few other and also is not afraid to write long stories that really involve plot and character and change. All thing I love. And I was not disappointed in the lest with the first chapter as lovey young Nicole begins what she thinks will be the next small chapter of her life and that I suspect will become the large permanent part of her life, the only part of her life that will matter eventually. As usual Scribbler does a great job with plot and characters. We meet Nicole her boss Miss Henderson, who is extremely well executed here, and the icy Clara, Henderson's PA. The dynamics here between them are very subtle and interesting.

Nicole feels the first tendrils of change but nothing overwhelming. As usual, Grey takes his good old, simmering, burning time with the inductions. Can't wait to see where this is going.

Finally there is Zorkmeister's Refashioned. I have to say I think this story has started to enter rare territory for me. Perhaps to get on my all time great list. It just keeps getting better, more intricate and hotter. So hot it burned my eyes when I read this chapter.

Annabel continues to get a real mental work over and now a physical one too since she has moved in with crush Lauren and the other girls. Lauren who we knew was also being inducted at a later stage was revealed this week to not only be a very strongly inducted slave but also with a evil underbelly to her happy, loving top coat. It is obvious now she feels nothing for Annabel but only acting out her programming.

Also the conspiracy and power of the controllers is revealed to be even larger than first thought. Not only the internet site is involved but so is the fitness company Medusa. Oh yeah, it sure is aptly named because it seems to have many heads.

In very powerful and hot scene, Annabel has regrets about introducing one of her old friends Sonya, who has a very nice and happy married life to the web site which of course will over time divest her of all husband and happiness and turn her into a empty drone with no real feelings.

Annabel's desperate sad feelings which may have led her to try escape all this and warn Sonya were quickly put to rest by her 'love' Lauren. By the time Lauren was done with her she didn't care about Sonya at all except as a sex object. Lauren...such a good and caring girlfriend.....

Like the other stories mentioned Zorkmeister really takes time to plot things out, make the characters very real and believable and not rush this very involved, intricate hot as hell story.

Can't wait to see what happens next: Will we meet Sonya? And if so, how much of change will be starting in her? Lauren seemed very interested in her when she noticed how hot she was in the picture on Annabel's phone. She also now knows Annabel had feelings for her friend, wanted to protect her. What is Lauren's intentions for Annabel? What are Medusa's intentions for all the girls as it reshapes there minds and bodies?

[scifiscribbler]

I don't know how Cerebus gets through these so fast.

Also, confessing to a curiosity how Bedtime Story will go down - it's about as close as I get to romantic hypno fiction.

[Midori Konton]

Cape City Chronicles: Today the City, Tomorrow... (mc mf ff md fd ma cb) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Years ago, a supervillain enslaved and then wiped out every male hero in Cape City. Now she’s escaped prison, and unpowered cop Alessandra Alvarez might be the only one who can stop her. But this time, neither of them will be working alone...

Holy hell, that was a hot brainwashing session!

Thank you! One of my better ones, I think.

[walter_kovacs]

Vanity (Dede) (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Dede
Denise is really enjoying this new shade of lipstick she ordered.

Didn't realise it was a bimboification story (not really my thing), but I did think it was well written and I liked the descent into it.

Extracts From The Westriver Gazette (mc fd) (new)  by HypnoticHarlequin
Ada Anderson is new in town. And what better way to introduce herself than to write to the local paper?

Epistolary can be hard to do, but it's a neat format when it works. I wasn't sure quite which direction this was going in until it became obvious, but it was a nice story.

[walter_kovacs]

Teacher's Lazy Friday Night has a 15 year old student controlling his teacher. I think that's against archive rules usually?

[Mind Zapper]

Typo on the age?  18~15?

[walter_kovacs]

Typo on the age?  18~15?

It was typed out as "Fifteen" and is repeated 3 times, so I think this one is pretty ironclad.

[Dede]

Vanity (Dede) (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Dede
Denise is really enjoying this new shade of lipstick she ordered.

Didn't realise it was a bimboification story (not really my thing), but I did think it was well written and I liked the descent into it.

Thank you Walter! I didn't really think it was 'bimbofication' when I wrote it, although there are some commonalities there. I intended it to be true MC/mind altering than anything. Regardless I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting!

[Delta Wave]

It was typed out as "Fifteen" and is repeated 3 times, so I think this one is pretty ironclad.

Maybe somebody should notify Simon about it?

[321]

Vanity (Dede) (mc mf md ft) (new)  by Dede
Denise is really enjoying this new shade of lipstick she ordered.

Didn't realise it was a bimboification story (not really my thing), but I did think it was well written and I liked the descent into it.

Thank you Walter! I didn't really think it was 'bimbofication' when I wrote it, although there are some commonalities there. I intended it to be true MC/mind altering than anything. Regardless I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting!

I really enjoyed Denise's reaction in this one. Vaguely aware of the changes taking place, but too addicted to the changes to do anything about it. Becoming more overtly sexual as a natural consequence of her initial vanity. Great stuff!

[Fortunato]

Based on the descriptions, I'm looking forward to reading the following: Vanity by Dede, Bubblegum & Plastic, Giselle the Gazelle, and Refashioned. This is the most exciting collection of story descriptions I've seen at one time in a fair while!

-Fortunato

[grey_shadow]

Teacher's Lazy Friday Night has a 15 year old student controlling his teacher. I think that's against archive rules usually?

It was typed out as "Fifteen" and is repeated 3 times, so I think this one is pretty ironclad.

Maybe somebody should notify Simon about it?

Under 18s are against Forum rules, but the EMCSA has its own standards. Check the EMCSA's own FAQ for more details.

In general, since the EMCSA is a curated site, while the Forum is a moderated site, Simon can afford to draw the line a little closer to the wind, while we have to accept that whatever line we draw here will inevitably be crossed for at least as long as it takes for a moderator to notice it and respond.

[Delta Wave]

Under 18s are against Forum rules, but the EMCSA has its own standards. Check the EMCSA's own FAQ for more details.

In general, since the EMCSA is a curated site, while the Forum is a moderated site, Simon can afford to draw the line a little closer to the wind, while we have to accept that whatever line we draw here will inevitably be crossed for at least as long as it takes for a moderator to notice it and respond.

What I'm wondering about is the *legal* standards. Not sure if posting these kinds of stories isn't breaking the law?

[MetaBob]

Can some of this discussion be moved to a more appropriate thread?

[MetaBob]

Algorithm by Carefully Random

The technologically-initiated sort of MC that I generally avoid as too impersonal, too easy, but a lot of people have said how much they like this so I thought I would give it a go, too, and I’m glad I did. Because the easy induction isn’t the point in this piece, the writing is, and I'm enjoying it very much. A lot more to read here, but the piece is worth it.

Decisive by All These Roadworks

I read one of this author's other pieces and few weeks ago and much prefer this one.

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, to the point, with a clever twist. It could definitely be a multi-part-er if the author wanted to go that route.

Giselle the Gazelle by AWMBH and Mother's Shadow by Mind Zapper

It’s difficult for me to say anything about either of these two pieces since I had a hand in editing them, but I wouldn’t have if I didn’t like them … I think they’re both very good and highly original. Enthusiastic kudos to both authors, one a first-timer, the other a third-timer!

Hostel by 321

I started reading this several weeks ago and have slowly been making my way through it. It can be a little difficult to follow who’s been turned into whom, but otherwise this is wonderfully executed.

The Spa by Dede

Fun stuff. I read the first 7 chapters, a very relatable and well-written buildup to a rather sudden and complete

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. As with the previously-mentioned multi-part pieces, I’ll get to more later.

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover by Alan Smithee

Shapow! Taut and juicy! Love the concept and execution!

Many thanks to all authors I cited here, as well as to every other writer who contributes to Simon's wonderful archive!

[Midori Konton]

Under 18s are against Forum rules, but the EMCSA has its own standards. Check the EMCSA's own FAQ for more details.

In general, since the EMCSA is a curated site, while the Forum is a moderated site, Simon can afford to draw the line a little closer to the wind, while we have to accept that whatever line we draw here will inevitably be crossed for at least as long as it takes for a moderator to notice it and respond.

What I'm wondering about is the *legal* standards. Not sure if posting these kinds of stories isn't breaking the law?

Unless an actual flesh-and-blood child is involved, or images, it is legal in the U.S. Probably. Mostly.

I still wouldn't do it, because ew, and most websites won't allow it, especially since no payment processor will allow it, but Simon shouldn't face any legal repercussions for it.

[walter_kovacs]

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover by Alan Smithee

Shapow! Taut and juicy! Love the concept and execution!

Wow thanks! This one was a struggle to write (kept throwing out chapters and redoing them) so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

[KiTA]

Under 18s are against Forum rules, but the EMCSA has its own standards. Check the EMCSA's own FAQ for more details.

In general, since the EMCSA is a curated site, while the Forum is a moderated site, Simon can afford to draw the line a little closer to the wind, while we have to accept that whatever line we draw here will inevitably be crossed for at least as long as it takes for a moderator to notice it and respond.

What I'm wondering about is the *legal* standards. Not sure if posting these kinds of stories isn't breaking the law?

I am not a lawyer, but no, it's not illegal in the US.  Communication between an adult (writer, artist, etc) and another adult (reader, viewer, etc) is protected under the 1st Amendment.  The only thing they could nail you on is Obscenity for stories, and it has to be something pretty darned obscene for them to go after, because no one wants to open the box of worms that is an appeal for an obscenity conviction, since Obscenity laws are blatantly unconstitutional.

[Delta Wave]

Okay, thanks for explanations. And sorry for derailing the thread somewhat...

The Witch, The Whip, His Wife and Her Lover by Alan Smithee

Shapow! Taut and juicy! Love the concept and execution!

Wow thanks! This one was a struggle to write (kept throwing out chapters and redoing them) so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

I admit I haven't read this one, Walter, but I love how you're homaging Greenaway with this title

[fumanchu]

Ah....321.  No one does Manchurian intrigue better.  Echoing Cerebus regarding “Deep Undercover”, you care for Cassie but can’t wait for her to be triggered, either by Paul or Avery (or by another hypnotized minion.  321 is so good at catching the subjective views of his characters.

You especially see this with “Hostel”.  He effortlessly shows us Rebecca inner thoughts.as she goes from heroine, enthusiastic hypnotic dom, and mesmerized slave.