New Releases-Saturday November 9th 2019

[Majorwrll]

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Amareth Falls (mc ff bd ft sf) (revised)  by Miss_Praxis
In the far future where nanotech has become a burgeoning new enterprise, corporations rule whole planets and individuals are often taken for granted. A former mercenary named Amareth is captured by an evil crime boss and her AI. She is slowly and methodically twisted to their whims.

Another Earth? (mc mf) (new)  by Chrysostomon
The crew of the Discovery aren’t sure where they’ve landed.

The Bakery (mc ff gr ex) (1 new chapter)  by Kallie
A group of four coworkers discover their ex-colleague has taken a job at a strange bakery where the pastries are more than they appear

Blake’s Magic Ring (mc mf md ds) (new)  by Daisy Isabella Britt de Melcker
Blake Hamilton inherits a ring that allows him to command the minds of certain people.

Brain Development Enterprises (mc mf md in) (2 new chapters)  by JC Beleren
A man purchases a series of self-hypnosis recordings to help him become more assertive.

The Corruption of Candace Kraft (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by scifiscribbler
Dr Kraft is annoyed to have to share her office space with another researcher.

Crossing the Rubicon (mc mf fd md) (3 new chapters)  by br0adband
There are moments in a lifetime where, with a single step, a line is crossed, a goal is achieved, a dream becomes a reality. Once that line is crossed, there’s no going back to who or what you might have been before. This is such a journey for one person.

Dead of Night (mc mf ff md fd) (new)  by SoVeryFascinated
An actress responds well to a stage hypnosis show ... and so does someone else.

Deep Undercover (mc mf md fd) (2 new chapters)  by 321
Paul is a private eye who dabbles in hypnosis. Cassie is his beautiful client. But there’s more to their relationship—and their case—than meets the eye.

Dick Picture Perfect (mc mf ff) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Will sends a dick pic to a girl, knowing that she would hate it. But it turns out that every woman who sees that picture needs more of it.

Editing Reality Book Three: Naughty Fantasies Unleashed (mc mf gr in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Steve gets a phone app that lets him edit other people.

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction (mc mf fd) (3 new chapters)  by S. B.
A collection of short writings focusing on various aspects of Femdom Mind Control.

Fun with Sabrina & Jon (mc mf fd ft cb) (1 new chapter)  by me-chan
A collection of moments between two ardent lovers and their mind-control dynamic.

Ghost Boy (mc mf ff md fd in la hm) (1 new chapter)  by MindSpark
Kyle has the ability to leave his body and become an invisible, ghost-like apparition. When he’s in this ‘ghost form’, he can influence the minds of anyone he touches. But, as he soon discovers, there’s far more to his power than just that.

The Heist — Operation Titanic (mc mf md) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Murray uses his mind control abilities to rob a bank

Her Husband’s Hucow (mc ff ma la gr ds) (1 new chapter)  by CNP
Mary and a few of her old college friends are invited to an almost forgotten friend’s home. What was expected to be a weekend of relaxation and reminiscing soon turns into something more expansive to the exquisite delight of everyone involved.

Hostel (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by 321
Rebecca’s trip to Berlin takes an interesting turn.

I Hate My Master (mc mm) (2 new chapters)  by maxrpotter
Mark moves in with a new roommate, and finds himself getting annoyed by a few small things about him, like when he leaves dishes in the sink, or when he leaves his clothes around the place, or when he gives Mark orders that he is unable to disobey.

I Hear and Obey (mc ff mf fd sf rb) (1 new chapter)  by Roboman127
A powerful woman maintains her supply of Slaves from Earth of the past and present.

In Good Hands (mc mf ff md ma in) (1 new chapter)  by Quiet Hypnotist
While living alone under one roof with her horny cousin, Chayenne grows more and more puzzled over her reaction to him. If only she could calm down and figure out what’s wrong. Surely his massages could help?

Intended Attraction (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Sidia
In this sequel to Unintended Attraction, our hero starts to take for granted the growing mastery of his ability.

Magical Girl Syn (mc mf ff md gr) (1 new chapter)  by Jennifer Kohl
Cynthia’s magical powers are unlocked at the age of eighteen, but along with them comes a terrible curse. Wait a minute—is it really so terrible?

The Magician (mc ff) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Investigation by the FBI into the perfect crimes by “The Magician” leads nowhere.

Milk (mc la) (new)  by MoldedMind
A woman is transformed into a cow.

The Mind Control Device (mc mf ff md in) (1 new chapter)  by mypenname3000
Dean invents a mind control device.

Minnie’s First Time (mc mf) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Minnie is going to lose her virginity. Noting is quite as it seems.

The Morning (Wood) After (mc mf) (new)  by Mindlevel Zero
A couple wakes up from a night they don’t remember… with urges they can’t resist.

A Novel Approach (mc mf ff fd ma gr bd) (new)  by HB5211
Betsy continues writing erotic fiction based on her real life experiences, while Heather deepens her control. Betsy watches as Samantha is ensnared in Heather’s world providing more inspiration for her second novel.

The Odyssey (mc ff mf sf) (1 new chapter)  by ThatSquickGuy
A simple survey mission on a newly discovered planet goes squickly wrong.

Pact (mc ff) (1 new chapter)  by Meleva
Truth has tried for twenty years to live quietly, to tend her farm, to forget all about the Pact that she was born to obey and bound to enforce. But an urgent need will pull her back to the magic that she’s spent so long seeking to abandon.

The Perfect Subject (mc ff mf fd md) (1 new chapter)  by Rhea Corvos
Melanie hopes to make some easy money by taking part in a scientific study. The scientists studying her are surprised by what they find.

Probed (mc mf ff md fd rb la sf) (1 new chapter)  by MCaesar
A group of college students are abducted by aliens wishing to study human sexuality.

Puppet Family (mc mf ff md in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Charles has powers over his family.

Red Flag (mc mf fd) (new)  by Chrysostomon
A government agency uses a genetically modified resource to combat targets.

Reflections (Chrysostomon) (mc mf ff in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
The Boucher family is brought under a demon’s spell—a demon called Raymond.

Remember (Chrysostomon) (mc mf md) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Paola remembers when she was young, before she was enslaved by the vampire.

Savannah’s Hypnotic Socks (mc ff ft) (1 new chapter)  by Fibaro
A co-ed gets a pair of hypnotic socks that she uses on her roommate.

The Spa (Dede) (mc ff mf fd md) (3 new chapters)  by Dede
Denise, a stressed-out teacher, takes a spa vacation.

Space Nut (mc mf ff md) (1 new chapter)  by Redsliver
Adam discovers a crash landed alien who shares a taste for women with him, and together they will have them all, no matter the price.

Sssslipping Into the Jungle (mc mf md) (new)  by Sleepy Hypno
Actress Jennifer gets lost while on a shooting break in India, only to come across a well known hypnotic serpent.

Succubi’s Touch (mc ff ma) (new)  by Dr. HypnoD
A powerful demon attacks a nunnery. And when she can turn them into a helpless, quivering mess with just a single touch, how can they possibility stop her?

Suzanne’s Prom Dress (mc mf md in) (new)  by All These Roadworks
Jarrad will buy her cousin an expensive prom dress, but only if she promises to some terms.

Totality (mc mf md) (new)  by Otis
Eric shows his girlfriend the meaning of totality.

Vampires Will Never Hurt You (mc mf md) (new)  by Jukebox
The Brighton Broadcast Group has another pretaped insert for its local news stations, an opinion piece on the importance of trusting our haemophagic friends who’ve only recently been revealed to the public. It’s... captivating stuff.

A Wee Bit of Magic (mc mf md ws) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Karen’s attitude changes after she gets peed on.

Whatever Gets You Through The Night (mc ma) (1 new chapter)  by T.MaskedWriter
A movie shoot in San Finzione is interrupted by a real-life murder.

What’s Your Name? (mc ff hm) (new)  by Skaetlett
Sadie asks her friend Zara to hypnotize her into being cool and confident, but she secretly puts a trigger in Sadie’s head to drain her intelligence every time she says her name.

Wildwood (mc mf md) (1 new chapter)  by notorioushypno
A mind control conspiracy spawns small-town hokum, entangling a group of plucky university students, some deadbeat locals, and a team of federal investigators.

Will You Be My Mommy? (mc mf in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
Two vampires want to play happy families

[Midori Konton]

And Magical Girl Syn makes two book-length stories done! (Youth of the Dark Lord was only novella length, it doesn't count.) The first took me a decade, this one took me a year and a half. At this rate, in a few years I'll be putting out a novel every update!

[br0adband]

Well, geez, I came to address a posting issue (Chapters 15 and 16 had been chunked together as one big one), and sent Simon an email about it. While I was making this post to point it out, he fixed it, so, bleh.

Thank you for your efforts, Simon, and getting that fixed so rapidly.

[Majorwrll]

And Magical Girl Syn makes two book-length stories done! (Youth of the Dark Lord was only novella length, it doesn't count.) The first took me a decade, this one took me a year and a half. At this rate, in a few years I'll be putting out a novel every update!

Congrats, still on the first chapter like most of what I read.

[CerebusOne]

So sad to see Rebecca turned into an MC monster by her traitorous, insecure GF Celeste who is bad news because of her physiological issues. Not intentionally wicked but just a victim of her own insecurities and kinks.  in 321s latest chapter of the great Hostel. She was a kind, caring person with a conscience and now she's..... All respect for 321's great writing and character development to make me feel that way. Not an easy task to pull off. The old Rebecca would loath what she is now.

Of course 321 loves to keep us guessing and plot rolling in all directions and this time was no exception as the chapter ends on a cork screw twist.

Then we have the second addition by 321 with Deep Undercover a completely different kind of story but no less compelling. Very good diverse chapter. Paul is fighting like hell to save Tara and the whole situation and things have become so precarious and complicated. He keeps coming up with ideas but how, stretching things out, avoiding disaster, but how long till the gum band snaps?

The old lady by the beans. I was all ready to hear her say, "Hello dearie!!" and see if the two stories cross pollinated.

Such a strong change from sleepy hypnosis in the first part to actually hearing Cassie sound alive in the second.

Who is the powerful voice at the end? The answer may decide who wins this thing. 321 is the master of cliffhangers, good smart ones.

Tension, anyone?

And loved the next chapter of Rhea Corvos' The Perfect Subjectas I have the whole story. This story is dark, but dark stories done right are delicious and this one is on all counts. Poor Melanie now stuck in the clutches of Ms. Reid, a truly vile, monstrous character and away from the much safer environs of Dr. Fall, relatively speaking. Melanie now undergoes some more programming. What is the end game here? That is one of the questions that certain great stories keeps open and Corvos is doing it perfectly. Nothing good for Melanie with Reid, who is inhuman in her drive to get things done, that's for damn sure.

The induction scene of Melanie in this chapter was terrific. Sooo hot and so intense. I mean just ridiculous how the story gets into Melanie's head, what she thinks and feels and wants while more control is slipped into her mind when she is given thoughts of a mind control pill and a breast pump.

“I want to pump my breasts,” Melanie whispered. “Oh please, please pump my breasts. Please. Please…”

Yeah, it made me want to pump something too.
 

Two other stories that I am really enjoying are Scifiscribblers Corruption of Candace Kraft and 
The Quiet Hypnotist's In Good Hands.

Candace betrays her family for her master with an idea she came up with! Talk about being under control, talk about hot! This story just gets better in plot and description.

And in Good Hands poor Chayanne is soon going to betray the love of her life, her boyfriend for her mind controlling cousin. Also a very steamy piece of work here.

[fumanchu]

I’ll say it again.  No one writes layered brainwashing/post hypnotic trigger fiction like 321.  As Cerebus says, you care for these ladies, yet you can’t wait for them to be triggered.

[gyrd]

I haven't read any of "The Mind Control Device", but I am fascinated by the genericness of the title.  And if that isn't good enough, the author's pen name is "mypenname3000"!

[Rodimus]

I finally got around to reading Deep Undercover and damn, that's one hell of a twisty-turny story. Brilliant stuff. Can't wait to see where this goes.

[321]

I finally got around to reading Deep Undercover and damn, that's one hell of a twisty-turny story. Brilliant stuff. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Thank you! This one has been fun to write!

[321]

I’ll say it again.  No one writes layered brainwashing/post hypnotic trigger fiction like 321.  As Cerebus says, you care for these ladies, yet you can’t wait for them to be triggered.

Thank you, fumanchu (and CerebusOne)! Poor Celesre may have made a mess of things, hasn’t she? Hopefully Rebecca can make things right. Although... who knows what she’ll do now?

[Dr. HypnoD]

Loved "What's Your Name?". It was great seeing Sadie forget her very on theme thesis and melt in Stephanie's hands. Also very interesting trigger, as I haven't seen too many that use the subjects name. On top of that, the party was a great setting for it, forcing her to keep introducing herself.

[BethanyP]

Hostel by 321 was brilliant as usual, maybe even more brilliant than usual and what a cliffhanger!  It feels like long-awaited trouble ... but who knows?  I can’t wait to find out.

Amareth Falls by Miss_Praxis was really disturbing (in the good way) and then compelling and then impossible to put down.  I’d never read it earlier and I’m really glad I did.  Unless I start having nightmares ...

Dead of Night by SoVeryFascinated is off to a wonderful start, as usual the characters are beautifully nuanced and the ‘ending’ is a typically breathless cliffhanger that has me intensely grateful that the next chapter is safely submitted for this week.  I just love everything about Fascinated’s storytelling. 

Thank you everyone for sharing your stories!

[Skaetlett]

Loved "What's Your Name?". It was great seeing Sadie forget her very on theme thesis and melt in Stephanie's hands. Also very interesting trigger, as I haven't seen too many that use the subjects name. On top of that, the party was a great setting for it, forcing her to keep introducing herself.

Thank you so much, Dr. HypnoD! This was my story and I really like how it turned out; I'm tempted to add a second chapter, per a few people's requests. Thank you for reading!

[CNP]

Late to the game - but pleasantly enjoyed Milk by Molded Mind.

I'm envious of the author's ability to maneuver so deftly without being hasty in Sheila's transformation.

Thanks for the delicious story telling Molded!

[northmiester]

It’s difficult to relate my pleasure on the fact that Thatsquickguy released his latest chapter of The Odyssey !  It has been a fabulous story and I eagerly await its completion!