New Releases - June 22nd 2019

[AlfredSchnittke]

enjoyed crutch as a sweet little love story.  last thing i expected to read here...

[Writer345]

Yew and Me

Oh goodness, Lina soon got the hang of her new role, in a dramatic way. Fine, I feel sorry for a couple of characters, not sure they deserved it, but can I really say that when I'd love it done to me? Nice tie up of details at the end, though hopefully there will be more in time. I really hope you've been reading this brilliant story
High end of definitely enjoyed. Lina could convince me to give more, mind!

Wow!!!  Thanks for the very positive review, Merry, I'm glad that you enjoyed it and hope that other people did, too...   I really put a lot into this story which oddly enough managed to prevent me from concentrating on anything else for about three months.  And 'yes', there is more planned, although whether anything comes from the ideas: who can say?  Currently I'm working on something that's not eligible for EMCSA (as it involves forced transgendering) but once that's out of the way I fully intend to return to Mars, so keep that map handy.

[CuyahogaKingKong]

enjoyed crutch as a sweet little love story.  last thing i expected to read here...

Thank you.  My diet is mostly corn syrup, so everything I write comes out sweet.

[Merry Brooks]

Yew and Me

Oh goodness, Lina soon got the hang of her new role, in a dramatic way. Fine, I feel sorry for a couple of characters, not sure they deserved it, but can I really say that when I'd love it done to me? Nice tie up of details at the end, though hopefully there will be more in time. I really hope you've been reading this brilliant story
High end of definitely enjoyed. Lina could convince me to give more, mind!

Wow!!!  Thanks for the very positive review, Merry, I'm glad that you enjoyed it and hope that other people did, too...   I really put a lot into this story which oddly enough managed to prevent me from concentrating on anything else for about three months.  And 'yes', there is more planned, although whether anything comes from the ideas: who can say?  Currently I'm working on something that's not eligible for EMCSA (as it involves forced transgendering) but once that's out of the way I fully intend to return to Mars, so keep that map handy.

Yes, something you mentioned to me had me suspecting you were planning to get back there at some point

[SB]

Femdom Mind Control Flash Fiction

I loved the first 2 of the 3 here, and the 3rd was pretty good too. But the end of Dud, and most of Its Raining Women just had me roaring with laughter. Oh to be one of those aliens, thats all I'm saying! I know they're both female dominant stories, but I dont care! Loved the 'logic' of Apologize too.
High end of definitely enjoyed. If the aliens want to take me on a trip to convince me to give more...?

Glad you had fun but I have to say I'm surprised the end of Dud made you laugh as I didn't write it with a humorous intent. I'm guilty in regards to the pun at the end of It's Raining Women though. Still, thank you for the high remark and I would contact the aliens gladly but they don't exist, or so they told me. 

[Fortunato]

Thanks again, Merry, for reviewing my fiction. I'm glad you're enjoying what I put out because I tend to think I skew darker than your tastes, but that doesn't seem to be an issue...yet.

-Fortunato

[Merry Brooks]

Thanks again, Merry, for reviewing my fiction. I'm glad you're enjoying what I put out because I tend to think I skew darker than your tastes, but that doesn't seem to be an issue...yet.

-Fortunato

Just dont treat that as a challenge!

[Fortunato]

Not a challenge, not at all. I really only write with myself as my audience, so the fact that it appeals to you and you're our primary reviewer is inspiring. Too bad these last two weeks have been really low production-wise for me. My energy isn't being required elsewhere, but it is being spent elsewhere. I'll finish up a chapter of Fit to Serve by tomorrow for Simon and post The Damned on the Arena Sunday. Naughty Girl is *this* close to being finished, but I just don't know if I can get it done tomorrow, too.

[mr potestas]

The Game (Chrysostomon) (mc mf ff in) (new)  by Chrysostomon
A family gets a new gaming system that they are forced to play with.

I must admit, found this kind of whimsical, for lack of better words. Just could not take the story all that seriously, but that wasn't necessarily a bad thing. Might have preferred a bit more lead up, though, to the MC action, but this was all pretty hot as it went along. The total lack of control was interesting, while it is objectively unclear if any could handle the apparent form of MC applied here. Certainly not for those looking for induction or incest or logic, but this pushed my buttons. 

[mr potestas]

Unraveling (mc ff) (new)  by Jukebox
A mad scientist explains exactly what she’s going to do to her helpless victim.

A quick Jukebox story? How could I resist? Well, this was quite interesting, the way it was written. We often get to see the villain go on a long monologue that probably reveals everything, and the hero finds a way to escape with the knowledge. The thing of it is, though, beyond pride and ego, the villain might just have gotten away with revealing everything prior. The Incredibles 2 gave us a sense of that, in how several superheroes were killed by the verbose villain prior. Thanos in those Marvel films was quite clear about what he wanted to do, and did it. In other words, its great to see Jukebox play with the concept of the villain pridefully explaining without clear consequence. This story was a well written and vivid.

[Merry Brooks]

No, S.B, I suspect its meant to be sinister intent, but I'm looking at it from a woman's POV!

Part 4

Laser Tag Party

Fine, I loved the scene between Annie, and Laine, even more when we learn the other event that was going on at the time. And oh my, what a wicked place to end that, loved it
High end of definitely enjoyed

Questions & Answers III

And so we get a few more clues to the end of the Universe as we know it! Loved the scenes between Jeffrey and Victoria/Vurdra in this, very nicely done.As to what happens next, who knows?
High end of definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Oh fine, having travelled long distance (Seattle-Chicago-Philadelphia and return) in my time, I roared with laughter about the Amtrak train situation stuff, I have to say. Oh, and the Zoey moment towards the end, great stuff. Clever way to end it too.
High end of definitely enjoyed

The Unholy Rites

I was concerned about this, for the religious side of it, but nothing as yet to really concern me on that point. Snag for me is its Sara I want something horrible to happen to, not Alicia, but maybe thats a twist to come? Certainly a decent story line, thats for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed

Last 4 to follow No, S.B, I suspect its meant to be sinister intent, but I'm looking at it from a woman's POV!

Part 4

Laser Tag Party

Fine, I loved the scene between Annie, and Laine, even more when we learn the other event that was going on at the time. And oh my, what a wicked place to end that, loved it
High end of definitely enjoyed

Questions & Answers III

And so we get a few more clues to the end of the Universe as we know it! Loved the scenes between Jeffrey and Victoria/Vurdra in this, very nicely done.As to what happens next, who knows?
High end of definitely enjoyed

61 Days in River City

Oh fine, having travelled long distance (Seattle-Chicago-Philadelphia and return) in my time, I roared with laughter about the Amtrak train situation stuff, I have to say. Oh, and the Zoey moment towards the end, great stuff. Clever way to end it too.
High end of definitely enjoyed

The Unholy Rites

I was concerned about this, for the religious side of it, but nothing as yet to really concern me on that point. Snag for me is its Sara I want something horrible to happen to, not Alicia, but maybe thats a twist to come? Certainly a decent story line, thats for sure
High end of definitely enjoyed

Last 4 to follow

[ErebusAether]

Fit to Serve: It just keeps getting better. The makeup and wig and clothes. Can't wait for the next one.

[Betsy]

61 Days in River City

Oh fine, having travelled long distance (Seattle-Chicago-Philadelphia and return) in my time, I roared with laughter about the Amtrak train situation stuff, I have to say. Oh, and the Zoey moment towards the end, great stuff. Clever way to end it too.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thank you so much Merry. And I'm glad you like Zoey. I find she's a useful character to have handy in a story.

61 Days in River City

Oh fine, having travelled long distance (Seattle-Chicago-Philadelphia and return) in my time, I roared with laughter about the Amtrak train situation stuff, I have to say. Oh, and the Zoey moment towards the end, great stuff. Clever way to end it too.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thank you so much Merry. And I'm glad you like Zoey. I find she's a useful character to have handy in a story.

[Shadra]

I see what you did there.

[Betsy]

I see what you did there.

 

[Merry Brooks]

I see what you did there.

She only posted it once over at Garden, mind!

Bit of a waste messing with my mind anyway at present, its already a total mess!

[Betsy]

I'd look a right Wally posting it twice in The Garden, wouldn't I?