New Releases-January 5th 2019-First Update Of The New Year

[Ice Bear]

This Is Our Story

This is more body swap, than mind control at this point, but I really dont care. Hailey sounds so much like she deserves something good happening in her life, just love it. And fine, Conner is the type of guy who deserves a good break too. I also love the way the author is thinking through side matters (organ transplant as example), as well as the standard stuff. If he wants to somehow arrange a body swap for me, before March, with a young Ginger Rodgers, or my avvie, I'd much appreciate it, lol!
Another that I could easily give slightly more to, but I'll stick with high end of definitely enjoyed for now

I'll see if Northside is taking enrollments for the spring semester.

[Merry Brooks]

And so to complete

Choose Your Own Transformation: The Cult of You

4 permutations on the cult for the price of 1. Usual mixed bag, Aurora would be my fave, Wesley no interest at all, other 2 in between. If the CYOT formula appeals to you, you'll find something here to like, and something you probably wont.
Definitely enjoyed, very much a compromise mark

Gabby the Gray

Well, as long as the Seers meet a horrible fate in the end, I'll live with it, I guess? Some good moments here, some I disliked too. Certainly gripped to find out who wins in the end, all the same.
Low end of definitely enjoyed, after length markdown

The Mark of P

Thank goodness I'm too old to be desired, and too old to get pregnant! Another where you know the formula, and how much of it you can take. Its been a while, so survived so far at least. But if the next chapter is more of the same formula...?
Low end of definitely enjoyed

Spellthief Stolen

This was always on a length limit, and in truth, showed nothing in the first half to really interest me at all. Shorter, I'd have pushed on, but nearly 15K, not going to happen!
No rating, length reasoning

Thats it for this week, thanks as always to all authors involved this week

[grey_shadow]

Spellthief Stolen

This was always on a length limit, and in truth, showed nothing in the first half to really interest me at all. Shorter, I'd have pushed on, but nearly 15K, not going to happen!
No rating, length reasoning

I'm enjoying it so far, but it does look like it's settling in for the long haul...

[raptor4d4]

I Just Can’t Say No

Unfortunately, I could quite easily say no. Much though I'd love to be put in 'drone mode', Jim is a lot of a jerk, to put it mildly. Obviously, if he wants to try and change my opinion? Not too many points for subtlety, I must say. Bimbo fans will get slightly more from this than me.
I'll give it enjoyed, but that really relates to the concept of drone mode, and processing, and little else.

Thanks for the feedback.  I confess, this hasn't been one of my best stories so I'm not surprised by your thoughts.  But I've got some more stories that I'm much happier with ready and plan to submit them here in the coming weeks.  A new one from me has already been submitted and should pop up the next time the site updates.  Even if you aren't fond of this one, I hope the future ones are more pleasing.   

[Merry Brooks]

I hope they will do too. Will have appealed to others, for sure, anyway

[melevawrites]

Alterations: Kathryn’s Confidence

I could do with someone paying for me to go to this place, or finding the money to go myself, anyway... Fine, I'm sure the alterations cant turn a 60 year old into a young sex kitten, but besides that...But yes, regardless of that, for assistance with acting (or dancing) roles, oh please... Fine, I'd love having that done to me, even if he is being naughty, oh fine, it appeals!
High end of definitely enjoyed. Almost got more, but an appointment could secure that, shall we say...?

Thank you, Merry! My co-author Scalar took the lead on this one, and it was a ton of fun to put together. We're both really excited to show people more of the Alterations world soon! I totally understand your length qualm in regards to Spellthief Stolen as well, for what it's worth. Thank you for having a look nonetheless.

I'm enjoying it so far, but it does look like it's settling in for the long haul...

I'm glad to hear you've liked it, grey_shadow! This story is/was my first writing project, big or small, and I might have bitten off more than I should've first chewed, but I think it turned out well. It's got a pretty strong length (though not every chapter is 15,000 words long), so I hope people enjoy it and it manages to keep interest in the coming weeks.

[TheHandsThatLead]

Saint Barbra’s Reform School

This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thanks Merry, I did do an edit pass on it but I guess my brain wasn't working very well that day

Well that was horrible

I've submitted an update to Simon, hopefully it's better this time around

[Merry Brooks]

Saint Barbra’s Reform School

This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thanks Merry, I did do an edit pass on it but I guess my brain wasn't working very well that day

Well that was horrible

I've submitted an update to Simon, hopefully it's better this time around

Might be wise, or you might get sent to the reform school, heaven forbid!

[SB]

Losers Can’t Be Choosers

Thing with this is, 'Clarissa' quite likes the idea of being turned into a latex clad drone! So, if it doesnt happen for real, in the 'production', can we at least have a minds eye picture, lol? Or backfires, latex clad Domme? Gail continues to play naughty, I only hope justice comes into play at the end, but we will see? And then of course, there is Nick, Angela, and maybe Gail butting her nose in, hmm?
High end of definitely enjoyed. Sorry, cant afford the Patron stuff, however much I'd love to know what happens next to Clarissa!

Apologies for the late reply, I don't know how I missed this. Yes, Gail continues to wreak havoc and Nick is to become a major player in future events. Clarissa will have her moment too but not just yet. Glad you're continuing to enjoy this one.

[TheHandsThatLead]

Saint Barbra’s Reform School

This really does need an edit, but beyond that, no complaints. Hey, I'd love the 'Trophy Wife' process done on me, but not sure anyone would want that option used at my age! Unless they have some method to knock 40 years of aging off your body, lol? A delightfully told story, a really fun read.
High end of definitely enjoyed

Thanks Merry, I did do an edit pass on it but I guess my brain wasn't working very well that day

Well that was horrible

I've submitted an update to Simon, hopefully it's better this time around

Might be wise, or you might get sent to the reform school, heaven forbid!

Good thing I'm VIP donor to the school and have a wing named after me